Unemployment: day 45

Today our family visited at a new library. The library was constructed about one year ago. By today we have not had an opportunity to visit here, but we have a time today. There are enough space to read books and study comfortably. In these days, it was really hot day, so many people visited here.

Correct version

Today our family visited a new library. The library was built about a year ago. Until today, we had not had the opportunity to come here, but we finally had time. There is plenty of space to read and study comfortably. These days, the weather has been extremely hot, so many people have visited the library.

IELTS Improvement Points

Collocation:

visit a place (not visit at)
　→ Correct collocation in English. “Visit at” is incorrect when referring to places.

plenty of space
　→ More idiomatic and natural than “enough space” when describing a library or facility.

the weather has been extremely hot
　→ A natural collocation to describe recent weather trends, better than “it was really hot day.”

Template:

Until [time], [subject] had not had the opportunity to [verb].
　→ Formal structure showing past perfect for missed opportunities. Useful in IELTS Writing Task 2 and Task 1 narratives.

There is [plenty/enough] of [noun] to [verb].
　→ Useful descriptive template for facilities, resources, or places (e.g. libraries, parks, schools).

Vocabulary:

built
　→ Correct verb for constructing a building. “Constructed” is correct but less natural in everyday contexts.

finally
　→ Adds emphasis that the opportunity came at last, improving fluency and cohesion.

recently / these days
　→ “In these days” is incorrect. Correct usage: These days, people tend to… or Recently, it has been…