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An email from JICA: recent JOCV trainees gave advice on how to study English

Unemployment: day 43

Today I received an email from JICA. The email said that whether I could prepare learning English enough at the training center. The email was attached a document which recent JOCV trainees advice how to study English.
Unfortunately I was not a person who had to study e-learning, so I was not sure how level I established in English. But I has studied every day from about one year, I hope to deal with the training.

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Today I received an email from JICA. The email asked whether I could prepare for learning English sufficiently at the training centre. An attachment contained a document in which recent JOCV trainees gave advice on how to study English.
Unfortunately, I was not among those required to complete the e-learning programme, so I was not sure what level of English was expected of me. However, as I have been studying every day for about a year, I hope I will be able to cope with the training.

IELTS Improvement Points

Collocation:

prepare for
 → Correct collocation when talking about readiness for study, exams, or training. “Prepare learning” is unnatural.

cope with the training
 → Common phrase meaning to manage or handle a difficult situation. More idiomatic than “deal with the training”.

an attachment contained
 → Standard business/academic English collocation for describing files included in an email.

be expected to [verb]
 → Very common collocation meaning “to be required or supposed to do something.” Example: Students are expected to submit their assignments on time.

Template:

I was not among those required to [verb]
 → Formal, precise way to describe exclusion from a group or obligation. Useful in IELTS writing when reporting rules or conditions.

However, as I have been [verb+ing] for [time], I hope I will be able to [verb].
 → A strong cohesive template to show contrast and progression, suitable for IELTS Writing Task 2.

Vocabulary:

training centre
 → Standard British English spelling (with “-re”), appropriate for formal writing.

sufficiently
 → More formal synonym for “enough”, often preferred in IELTS academic contexts.

It is expected that [subject + verb] …
 → Useful formal structure to describe general expectations. Example: It is expected that participants will complete the course within six months.

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