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I developed a new flashcards app. About two months ago, I created a similar app for the first time; however, it was closed due to security issues with the free server I was using. Therefore, I redeveloped the app on my homepage’s hosting server. I have added new features such as the ability to select card categories. You can try it on my homepage below. Please give it a try, and I would appreciate your feedback on how to use it.
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Original statements
I developed a new flashcards app. About two month ago, I developed first made same app, however it was closed because of security of the sever I used free. So I developed again the app on my homepage’s host sever. I increased the function such as selecting card categories. You can use it at my home page below. Let’s try it, and I hope you to tell me the usage.
IELTS Improvement Points
Collocation:
→ “security issues”
（Common phrase used to describe problems related to safety or protection, often in IT contexts. Using natural collocations improves fluency and accuracy.）
Collocation:
→ “hosting server”
（Correct collocation when referring to a server that hosts websites or applications. Avoid phrases like “host sever” which are incorrect.）
Template:
→ “I developed a new app. About [time], I created a similar app; however, [issue]. Therefore, I redeveloped it on [new platform].”
（This is a clear structure to describe past attempts, problems, and improvements, useful for describing projects or experiences in IELTS Speaking or Writing.）
Template:
→ “I have added new features such as [feature examples]. You can try it on [platform]. Please give it a try, and I would appreciate your feedback.”
（Useful for invitations and polite requests for feedback, common in formal and semi-formal contexts.）
Vocabulary:
→ “redeveloped”
（A useful verb to indicate building or creating something again, often with improvements. More precise than just “developed again”.）
Vocabulary:
→ “feedback”
（A formal and commonly used word to mean comments or suggestions on work or performance. Important for communication in academic and professional settings.）
